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Bougie Hippie's avatar

so fkg good. could you actually imagine if you sent this out to see editors/publishers reactions. 🀣

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Paul D'Arcy's avatar

Well, thank you, Cyn! I'm glad we connected. Your work is amazing - so creative!

Thank you for reading mine ☺️

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Darcy Dudeck's avatar

I love the creative ways you tell stories Paul 😊

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Paul D'Arcy's avatar

Thank you, Darcy! ☺️❀️

Thank you so very much πŸ™πŸΌ

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williamphaynes/elliott's avatar

Cool write

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Paul D'Arcy's avatar

Hey, Thanks, William! I appreciate you, friend. It's a shorty - like some of yours. Glad you like it. ☺️

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Anne Roche's avatar

Brilliant. Stephen King-ish.

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Paul D'Arcy's avatar

Ooooo 😯 creepily complimentary

Thanks, Anne πŸ₯³

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Laura MacPherson's avatar

This is brilliant

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Anne Roche's avatar

100% agree!

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Paul D'Arcy's avatar

…and YOU’RE the Best, TOO, Anne! πŸ™πŸΌβ€οΈ

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Paul D'Arcy's avatar

Awww - you're the BEST, Larz! πŸ€— ❀️

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Waving From A Distance's avatar

Absolutely hysterical! Great way to start my weekend. I couldn't have written this in a million years of trying! I loved it. I will subscribe :-)

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Paul D'Arcy's avatar

Thank you so very much! β™₯️

I appreciate you and your poetry, as well as your fascinating stories. Such talent in your family ☺️

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