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lauriefromearth's avatar

Oh my god, this is amazing

Paul D'Arcy's avatar

Too kind 😊

Matthew Martin Eichenlaub's avatar

OMG! This is amazing. May all egos burst forth and gobble the world, drink it, eat it, digest it, poop it out, mercy, mercy mercy. We all could use a little mercy now. Mary Gauthier.

And Leonard Cohen...

And let the heavens hear it

The penitential hymn

Come healing of the spirit

Come healing of the limb

Behold the gates of mercy

In arbitrary space

And none of us deserving

The cruelty or the grace

O solitude of longing

Where love has been confined

Come healing of the body

Come healing of the mind

Darcy Dudeck's avatar

This is amazing Paul! And you do have a great way of ending a story, but also making the reader feel like they’re right there with you in the story 😊

Paul D'Arcy's avatar

Thank you, Darcy. That's a very high compliment indeed. Thank you, my friend.

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I’m spending a lot of time reading . . . Not enough time writing.

Rea de Miranda's avatar

Wow, Paul! I love this. You created something amazing with your word duel!

Paul D'Arcy's avatar

Thanks, Rea!